Review Detail of MooingNymph in Talon Flintwolf the last Dragonborn of Tylingariea series

The story has a great world premise that I can see developing in some interesting ways. The characters are also creative, would just like them to be described more. I would also suggest finding a proofreader and editor maybe, some words are not what they should be and the overall layout could be changed to make the reading experience much more fluid.