Review Detail of BambooFirefly in Bullet Knight: A Mercenary's Journey to Another World

Although a good premise, this novel has its own flaws. As I read the first chapter I couldn't help but notice that though the grammar was nigh perfect, the writing flow, scene transitions and point of view did not have the same quality unfortunately.I'm saying that this novel is a good read and has a lot of potential but the chapter length is too long and the frist chapter all but info dumps about the supporting characters.not to mention the abrupt switch between pov. The narrative alternated between 1st person and 3rd person. which is NOT a good thing.However, despite the flaws, this work has the potential to develop beautifully.