The plot, if you can call it that, starts off with the protagonist's previous life, where this guy is so unlikable, And guess what? It has zero relevance to the so-called story that follows, You then dive headfirst into a mind-numbing reincarnation scenario, where you endure mindless conversations about a baby and the conversations of their dumb family, and You need to know every single detail, like how the baby sucks on some booba. The chapters consist of nothing more than some meaningless family interactions, repetitive internal monologues, and conversations that go nowhere, You will know about the protagonist's thoughts about the existance of quirks and villains multiple times in the first chapters, since apparently the readers don't know what heroes, villains and quirks are. The protagonist, without a quirk, suddenly gains the ability to enter his dreams and become a martial art prodigy, even though he never practiced any form of martial arts before, because he randomly gain a perfect memory and analysis ability out nowhere, and later on a special mutated physical quirk, and even more powers after that. The plot continues with thrilling moments where the family buys clothes or the protagonist waits his birthday. Oh, and the occasional mention of how evil or smart he is. Please, spare me the agony. I could not care less about this so-called 'genius' who can deduce information without any prior knowledge or logical reasoning. And He has a great need to hide every single aspect of himself, including his thoughts and quirk form his family, that he doesn't even like, So why is even bother even having them there in the first place? There's no concept of realism or normal character development. If you think you'll get any progression or interesting development, you won't.
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LIKEI agree with some of the things you say but almost all of your problems have an answer the power he has is based on Visionary Pathway of Lord of mysteries not some made up quirk if anything the writer should have made him quirkless but with the power as it would cause less confusion on the power and what he could do. Had someone make a Haku from Naruto fanfic with the quirk' being chakra that a lot of people have but some have more quirks 'bloodlimits' so it came off very wrong for the MHA world.
He isn’t allowed to criticize a story because he has too high of standards? Is this what you are trying to say?
Cat_Tip:For all those who actually read the comment don’t take it to heart he rates every story a 1 star pretty much some stories I even like I think he expects every fanfic he reads to be like a professional novel/book. When authors are just here having fun.
Exactly go somewhere else these aren’t professionally written novels/books he taking this to seriously.
Dao_Of_Sauce:He isn’t allowed to criticize a story because he has too high of standards? Is this what you are trying to say?
Cat_Tip:Exactly go somewhere else these aren’t professionally written novels/books he taking this to seriously.
Cat_Tip:Exactly go somewhere else these aren’t professionally written novels/books he taking this to seriously.
From the synopsis says he git the powers from the spectator pathway from lotm which had the Ability to enter dreams and manipulate people and it also gives better memory better analysis . It’s even more busted cuz in lots when one reaches seq 0(God) they can envision things with this pathway and give life to things example he can envision a pen that can control flames example he can give life to a pen which can be used to attack people but it mostly used on skeletons of fallen gods so that they can get their powers to fight for the user