Review Detail of EvilBlueCrystal in Reverend Insanity: Hunting Heaven

The interactions, dialogue, and pace are perfect. Maybe include descriptions about the surroundings when there's a change from one place to another to make it natural. The plot can focus on events the original skipped and different outcomes or missed opportunities where the character takes a different approach for gaining resources. Avoid introducing and abruptly changing locations without purpose, they should serve a purpose, such as setting the tone, advancing the plot, or revealing important information. Don't skip the growth and progression, like cultivation, training, sects, and learning, include new abilities. It's better to include the summary of current skills and resources at the end of a chapter. Include memorable character quotes. You can also change the pov to other relevant character of the current plot. If the protagonist forms a team or recruits important members, dedicate chapters to explore their backgrounds, plans, thoughts, and significance to the protagonist's organization, don't immediately abandon them. Plot idea template for creating smart characters: Character A thinks he is the strongest and plans for the treasure but his pawns escaped his control, Character B ignores the original plan and plans to take everything for himself and others who he created an alliance, Character C is actually a spy that ruins their plans without knowing of their rebellion, Character D has a scheme in place and takes advantage of their fight to reap the benefits but is stopped by Character E during his escape.