Review Detail of lbaro97 in Fairy Tail: Metal and Threads
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This is a very well-written story. The pacing is very good in my opinion and it is worth giving it a try. However, as of chapter 72 I will now not continue to read the story because I can now see what the crossover aspects are going to be like. It seems the crossovers will only introduce new Harem additions. I am already not a fan of Harem stories because the introduction of a Harem always results in two dimensional and forced relationships. This story is good enough that I could ignore the Harem elements. However, with the introduction of a crossover harem, it has just become too much. Which is honestly sad, because the story doesn't need Harem and crossover elements. It is already great without them. It would be, in fact, better without them. For the author, I can only recommend to rethink the harem and crossover aspects. For the potential readers, I recommend that you try this story. Form your own opinion on it.
Fairy Tail: Metal and Threads
SixthSense1029
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He even used the last chapter (80) which is also a crossover to make him lose his arm for no reason other that the author wanted to make the mc uses a prosthetic arm. In the first place how a monster that got a hole blown through is head/skull using a railgun spell survive is pure bullshit from the author just to make the mc lose his arm to make him use a prosthetic and to add a women/girl to his crossover harem.
It's not the fact that there are crossover elements in this story that bothers me. It is the fact that the crossover seemingly only exists to introduce new Harem members.
SixthSense1029:I can understand where you're coming from. Not everyone likes to have characters from different series mixed together. But it is mentioned that there will be a few crossovers in the second chapter. So, to call it out when you were warned about it early is a bit unfair, isn't it?
Okay, I guess that makes more sense. But not all the crossovers will be for the harem. I realized that was a bad idea from my last fic. Most of the other crossovers will be for comic relief or to be used as villains
lbaro97:It's not the fact that there are crossover elements in this story that bothers me. It is the fact that the crossover seemingly only exists to introduce new Harem members.
Dione_Bryant:I was under the impression that a married couple reincarnated? why is author having one of them cheat on each other. I was hoping for a semi wholesome couple reincarnation story. not another SAO where it's a polyamorous-monogamous relationshoip
Dione_Bryant:it's a harem, no? Emotionally cheating is a no-no for me as well.