Review Detail of Deathunterz123 in VERSATILE CHAOS INHERITOR

Most believeable start to a reincarnation fanfic I have seen yet. The premise of the story is decent, however it seems like it’s a bad Chinese or Korean translation with the multitude of grammatical mistakes. There are also a few spelling mistakes aswell. One suggestion is for the status to space out the skill name and the (x) due to it being a little confusing to read. The character tries to hold onto his “manliness” despite being changed to a girl for over 9years which one would think he/she wouldn’t care about after getting used to. Mind you that this isn’t saying I dislike it, but it’s got a lot of polishing before it becomes “good.” Author of you do read this I recommend before you get to far till it becomes unchangeable to shove your work through something like grammerly, do some spellchecking, and try and make the story flow a little better. Otherwise good luck with the future of your story.