Review Detail of noname_marco in Fairy Tail: Magical Life

While everyone is entitled to their own opinion, I personally have several issues with this story. First of all, I find it hard to believe that the main character is able to learn alchemy simply by watching Full Metal Alchemist. This seems unrealistic and takes away from the story's credibility. Additionally, there are numerous grammatical errors throughout the text which can be distracting and hinder the overall reading experience. Another problem I have is with the author's tendency to copy content from the wiki without making any changes, and in one chapter, even including an event that takes place 200 years in the future. Furthermore, the main character vows to protect his family, but we as readers have not been given any information about them to feel a connection to them. Moreover, the introduction of Truth from Full Metal Alchemist seems out of place and doesn't even feel like it belongs in a Fairy Tail fanfiction. Ultimately, the story has potential, but its execution leaves much to be desired.