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Review Detail of Alchemist in Harry Potter: The Boy Who Eats[COMPLETE]

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Alchemist
AlchemistLv1310mthAlchemist

The story has a good premise, but the MC is incredibly annoying. He's too loud, exuberant and constantly acts without thinking about the possible consequences of his actions. Sure, it's reasonable for him to act like this since he doesn't have a lot of experience and was never taught better, but that doesn't make him any less annoying. He also shows no real interest in learning magic and only cares about eating different food. What's the point of writing a Harry Potter isekai story if the MC doesn't actually try to become a skilled wizard?

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Harry Potter: The Boy Who Eats[COMPLETE]

MisterImmortal

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Murphy_
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Oh yes, I am definitely gonna continue it. I am currently preparing for college. So, I am focused on it. But once this phase passes, I will come back to writing for sure.

BludKratz:Dude every gonna re-start your manhwa multiverse story? One of the first stories I read when I got into Webnovel’s.
MisterImmortal
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You know... The name of the fic is The boy who EATS.

Sky_Demon_Order
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Author don't worry about criticism webnovel, and humanity needs more of your happines

MisterImmortal:You know... The name of the fic is The boy who EATS.
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BludKratz
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Dude every gonna re-start your manhwa multiverse story? One of the first stories I read when I got into Webnovel’s.

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BludKratz
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Glad to hear that, I’ll definitely keep an eye out. Good luck on your college stuff hope it goes well!!!

Murphy_:Oh yes, I am definitely gonna continue it. I am currently preparing for college. So, I am focused on it. But once this phase passes, I will come back to writing for sure.
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