Below Average (I don't recommend)WQ (3/5): Several grammar lapses that can be fix. I refer using gramarly app/prog or reading English dictionary to broaden your vocabulary.SD (1/5): Poor portrayal of returning back in time as he didn't do shit and still abide in the canon timeline. No changes whatsoever as he treats himself as a side character or observer.CD (1/5): Lack of characterization; as the old saying goes "age comes with wisdom" which wasn't utilize or even use in this FF especially OG kakashi/MC.US (3/5): Below average speed of update that matches the quality of this FF.WB (1/5): No changes or addition to NarutoVerse, same everything and no additional exploration of the ninja world.
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