Review Detail of Moist_Yoda in My Sword Intent Can Be Infinitely Improved

this best rating i can give as the story was just garbage. The first problem is grammar. the second is writing quality. the third is repeating sentences just to fill the word count. which shows lacking skill in writing and shows us, the reader, you don't care about our experience. if i was told this was written by Ai, I wouldn't believe them as even bad ai can write better. this isn't 10 years ago. You have every tool available to make a story with good writing quality. if you can't afford an editor, guess what's been made recently. yes, that is called Ai, and you can go use chatgpt to check for any spelling mistake. here's a prompt you can use: "Check for any spelling mistakes." Which is one of the many Prompt you can use to Improve your story. You have so many tools at Your fingertips that it's maddening when you say murder instead of failed assassination Attempt. Character is he in one Sentences, then the next is a she. This simply ruins the flow of the story. There are so many issues at point. this author just needs to hire an editor or actually put effort into his writing. cause I put more effort into this review than the author at this point. to see such lazy writing is just appalling. I tried to give you the benefit of the doubt. but at chapter 75, which I paid for and believe when say, "Don't support this author ever!" okay, little Harsh, but until some big changes in overall writing quality and overall story telling. I will keep saying not to support this author.