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I loved the story, it's great, and I hope you continue to write it, and I will support you, even a little. Also, I wish you would try to give him a special talent without it being because of the system, such as the wonderful control of the ball.
Deleted ff 02
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I know that I just want him to be on his own I mean discover his raw physical talent and develop it in this system if you want that of course.
Saint_Hubris:I mean up till now he have barely been helped by the system
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that's pretty much what he have been doing, also I don't wanna spoil in case you haven't read every chapter. but at some point he even prioritized stamina so that he can improve even more on his own. he don't plan on relying on the system but instead on using it.
AnaSs_ATLAS:I know that I just want him to be on his own I mean discover his raw physical talent and develop it in this system if you want that of course.