Review Detail of Daoist103429 in Pokemon: The Darkest Timeline

First I want to congratulate you because I honestly think that writing is difficult and your story is very good. The only thing I could comment on is that you don't explain at the beginning or in a note the potentials of the pokemon and I feel the start is very fast, that is, with 1 training week beat the police, it seems a bit exaggerated but it's your story and as I said it seems to me to be very good, just those details