Review Detail of Black_H34rt in Billion Dollar Player

This is my review as of chapter 41… This is a great read and would be greater if you just stick with the way you’ve been writing the story from the beginning. As of recent chapters(39-41), the story feels forced… While hiding his identity in a place he just arrived to find information seem smart, it’s stupid to do that in a level one form and from the way you described it, changing forms doesn’t seem like an instant thing. It takes seconds i presume and don’t say anything about the woman beside him, you said yourself she is tied to his growth so I don’t see how a level one form completely nerfed body will help him much when he can be insta killed or knocked out or sth like that Just free the man, mate. Let him go guns blazing, It ain’t like scurrying around like a rat is going to get him his revenge afterall and he is also not twins with his brother so they won’t even recognize him Got a lot to say but i feel like you should already get my point afterall your work don’t look like a novice Enjoyed the story up to this point though some cringey line in the last chapter i read made me groan… Enjoyable overall