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Review Detail of Jack_Priper in Limitless Evolution: The Path To Immortality

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Jack_Priper
Jack_PriperLv610mthJack_Priper

(4 2 3 3 2)/5=2.8This story has a decided plot. it's not a copy paste of the reincarnation genre so there is that.Most reviews here call this story a gem or gold.But it has its flaws. what's the smartest in one world/pond became the smartest in another for now or until arrogance and confident certainty are met with a reality check. other characters somehow are automatically less intelligent or overestimate themselves too much. non mc characters who've trained themselves for this world for a while somehow train less than a younger MC who even trains more effectively than they do. and that's considering they have a knack for physical fighting and he doesn't. this I find to be too mc biased. I admit the grammar is pretty much flawless. i say pretty much because I'm not perfect so there may be mistakes i would not notice.we met characters who showed the mc that his smarts and cheat will not always surpass years of experience and training. this world was called medieval, then dismissed as medieval and magical, and religious. that works.I'll be dipping out as I am not too interested in main characters who alienate a new family who actually does care for them. The baby manipulating the parents was expected, but taken a little further than is the norm from what i have read. It basically tipped the balance that makes the manipulation interesting, funny, and cute. To, everything is nothing but a means to an end. as in nothing mixed with what would otherwise be normal pursuing goals

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Limitless Evolution: The Path To Immortality

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copycat_For_reaper
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I wonder what he will choose if it is immortality or his family

Jack_Priper
Jack_PriperLv6Jack_Priper

after much consideration. i think immortality is the choice most MCs make here. sometimes it's with their wives, typically it's alone. so this MC ..... without personal development. will have forgotten about his parents and sister when he gets close to immorality. or worse case would be he experimented on them just like the last ones.this could all change with personal development for the mc. but he's currently too "perfect" and arrogant to mentally grow

copycat_For_reaper:I wonder what he will choose if it is immortality or his family