Review Detail of Matthew_Gooche in One Wish to Own the World
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The protagonist continually acts in contradiction to his belief. He espouses a lack of trust towards all, yet will often place temporary trust in those around him regardless. For example Jane and Diana, they are almost entirely useless, he decided to show all his cards, and then questions whether or not to kill them... is he retarded? Why even insist on moving with them at all? His guards were sufficient, they amounted to very little, not to mention their undue ownership of loot. He continues to be completely idiotic in how he manages his secrets, he doesn't want people to know, tells everyone, feels betrayed, and then wants to kill them. For someone who is supposedly supremely intelligent, he is a complete fool, I don't even understand what foreseeable boons he seeks to obtain in doing all that. It just makes for tedious and painfully stupid reading. It's another pathetic protagonist who seemingly can't exist without companions, I will never understand the rationale.
One Wish to Own the World
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First I'll say that I'm proud to get 2.5 stars from you after having a glance at your profile and seeing you never rate a novel above a single star, it shows the great quality of my craft, especially since you got to chapter 108 before quitting and maybe beyond. Second, if you want to enjoy a novel, try to rationalize things in your mind, since you will never find a novel where the author has the same thoughts as you throughout the whole story. Just because your thoughts didn't lead there, it doesn't mean the author was irrational in his thought process, you simply need to think a little bit more and you'll find the answer deep down in your heart. Third, a novel can be seen as a frame, there's a limit to how many words an author can write to describe the thought process before it turns tedious to everyone. You can fill this blank space the author could not fill with what you think makes sense, and that's the beauty of entering the world of the story. That's it for now, good luck.