Review Detail of Pomu in One Wish to Own the World

The plot is filled with captivating action, conflicts, and unexpected twists that held my attention from start to finish. While the characters are intriguing, I wished for more depth in their backgrounds and emotions. The descriptive and action-oriented writing style was effective, although a touch more sentence structure variation would have enhanced the overall reading experience. Nevertheless, it remains an enjoyable story with potential for further growth and exploration, and I'm sure the author has progressed much more past the initial 30 free chapters available.