I have read the first chapter and not impressed. The first chapter is too choppy… no background i am not aure is there a pre read… He has super powers which he can see on a blue screen…. Why is it like a adaptation of shadow slave and mech touch. Anyways that aside… some build up for chapter 1 would havw helped
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