Review Detail of SnowApathie in Loki: The Frozen King (MCU)

Hello there, this is the author of this story. This story is in an AU of the MCU with the X-Men and some Comics plot and characters. English is my third language, so the writing quality might not be the best, but I don't think there are many grammatical errors. I am currenlty trying my best to update daily. The story is not fast paced but I also wouldn't call it slow paced. I am trying my best to slowly develop all the points of the story, but I am not the best writter. I have slowly developed Loki's family, and I will try to develop other characters, but only the mains one will be teh focus of develoment and such. This is a MCU Fanfic but I have modified some things, like what Yggdrasil is, or Jormungandr. You can use this as a Q&A thread. I hope you will like my story. If you have ideas or plot ou want to see you can also comment them here. Thx everyone for reading this.