generally slow paced novels are considered demerit's but for this novel author took time to explore the characters personality. It has stability of updates . as for story development it passes with 5/5.As for world background, we are still learning about the world .as it would be revealed later .
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LIKE1.Arrogant Young Master Template A Variation 4 2.Tree of Aeons these 2 novels were one of my early reads .. these 2 have most character depth and world building and style .. with slow progression.(especially the 2nd one). In a good way your story has potential and you are using it . but writing is a bit rough . like dialogue between characters. If you have time try these novels on "royalroad". and thanks for writing this story..
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aryan_Sharma:1.Arrogant Young Master Template A Variation 4 2.Tree of Aeons these 2 novels were one of my early reads .. these 2 have most character depth and world building and style .. with slow progression.(especially the 2nd one). In a good way your story has potential and you are using it . but writing is a bit rough . like dialogue between characters. If you have time try these novels on "royalroad". and thanks for writing this story..