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Alright so I was stacking it for a very long time and now that I have read till chapter 130 I feel that I am now able to comment on this masterpiece while the first few chapters were complicated for me to understand you were able consolidate the pace of the story which was good. Let me talk about the characters, The mc's personality is something I am still not able to grasp but by understanding on how you want to showcase his personality I think you are able to do justice to it in the recent chapters. If I talk about the interaction between the characters it is good and well written, though the mc,s interaction with his parents to me seems unreal, it does not feel natural to me and as you are an Indian I do hope you are able to understand what I am talking about, though his interactions with the other characters are way better than most of the novels here, good job. Now talking about the world background it is very well written, but it is confusing for me as I don't even know the gods from other mythologies other than our hindu ones, you were also able to do justice with how to showcase the world by describing even minute details which is worthy of respect The story development is also going good but the only downside of this novel is the number of mysteries there are just way to many mysteries and new one keeps coming up without the previous ones getting solved this really gives a headache. And also there is no hint of the fl coming I definitely would not want that princess to become the fl I want someone who is badass cool op and have a practical view of the world just like the mc. well other than these the story is definitely intriguing the characters also feel real, the story is good too and it feels good to see a fellow countryman doing such a great job. keep it up @DevilDarkness

Life Of A Nobody - as a Villain

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this is nice. thnks buddy. mysteries will be answered in academy arcs. fl will also come in academy too. and don't worry, she's perfect in every aspect. cool, calm, cold, Calculative - she's an all in one package. as for interaction with parents, that's because man just transmigrated there, and considers them to be strangers. after d time skip, they're like d family to him so that's solved already. hope that helps, thnks again for d ve feedback đŸ«‚