Review Detail of Chizaru in I have a feeling that something is wrong here

Although the novel is relatively short, it has the potential to become a thrilling page-turner. However, the limited number of chapters leaves readers wanting more and hoping for the story to continue. The main character, George, is relatable and sympathetic, as readers are transported into his unfamiliar world alongside him. The plot is well-paced and keeps readers engaged, making it a great read for fans of action and suspense. The systems' aims from the first chapter are so nebulous and uninteresting. Personally, I would have preferred a strategy with a specific objective, such as: (1) Achieve level 60 within 7 months (2)Recruit 10 obedient servants, and attach to their souls a death vow (3) I'm not even sure why the subquest "murder the children" exists. These side missions are the ones that ought to assist the Mac develop so that she can kill the destiny kids. These objectives lacked a sense of urgency, the plot felt narrow-minded, and they lacked structure. In addition, I dislike the system's facilitation of the MC's easy reaping of rewards without any actual hard work. This may be the author's interpretation of the system genre, but it will show why the systems are detested so much because they strengthen the plot. I'd like to see the author step back and consider the type of system he wants to write and how it will impact the story's long-term success.