Review Detail of BurnerAccount in Elite Dungeon Manager
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Yo, BA here. Please read the 'Read before you try' in the very first part of the novel. Besides that, thank you very much for checking my novel and I hope you'll enjoy it. If you have any questions, please ask right away. I'll be sure to answer with the best of my abilities!
Elite Dungeon Manager
BurnerAccount
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Thank you very much. I do hope to meet your expectations. Do criticise me if there's anything you dislike.
q_imb:Looks interesting, especially the inspired by iras, tapov and top management part. I enjoyed all those novels so I’m looking forward to this.
its look interesting but you have to Explain it things first like you mixed dungeon Hunting and stardom people will don't understand what happening like take term star chasing first i thought it was something like paparazzi then in the next scene we see mc giving test for hunting . I want to ask what is role of dean if Liam is there manager and please change the prologue or just edit it and I advise you to write chapter name prologue because lot of people just skip the prologue and start reading from chapter 1 .
Sure, I will heed your advice. Thank you very much for your feedback. I appreciate it. Regarding Dean, I think I've explained it. He's helping Liam settle in as a manager. He will leave once he's confident Liam can handle the role as a manager by himself. He's still a trainee after all.
Sonu_Siraj_5546:its look interesting but you have to Explain it things first like you mixed dungeon Hunting and stardom people will don't understand what happening like take term star chasing first i thought it was something like paparazzi then in the next scene we see mc giving test for hunting . I want to ask what is role of dean if Liam is there manager and please change the prologue or just edit it and I advise you to write chapter name prologue because lot of people just skip the prologue and start reading from chapter 1 .
Sonu_Siraj_5546:will there be any trigger for activating time travel /future sight or he will be just like Wednesdayimage
Ah, that makes sense. Hmm, this does sound a lot like his powers. However, the triggers don't come from touching certain objects. There's specific triggers which I will reveal further in the story.
Sonu_Siraj_5546:Wednesday's powers come in the form of psychic visions of the past and future. While she isn't able to conjure these visions on demand, she does experience them when touching an object that triggers her supernatural powers.
I am indeed contracted. [You can check this if they can accept gifts. Only contracted works can ] I have been contracted for quite a bit. I just haven't gone premium yet.
Lord_Azathoth:Why isn't your book contracted yet? It's already 70 crossed. Did you not apply for it?
BurnerAccount:I am indeed contracted. [You can check this if they can accept gifts. Only contracted works can ] I have been contracted for quite a bit. I just haven't gone premium yet.
