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Review Detail of Chizaru in 子にちわ

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as intriguing as the premise of the story may be, the amount of chapters in the novel is far too low to come to a solid conclusion on whether the book is good or not. While the synopsis of the story is gripping, the lack of depth and development in the characters and plot leaves the reader with a feeling of incompleteness. Overall, Demergat has the potential to be an exciting and engaging read, but it falls short in its execution. The author needs to add more substance and detail to the story and its characters, and a more substantial amount of chapters to truly give the reader a sense of closure and satisfaction.

子にちわ

Blyinx

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Blyinx
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Bro I only started three days ago 😂😂😂 I’m trying man. But thank you for the criticism anyway, I appreciate you pointing out the flaws I’m unable to see. I’ll work on character depth going forward :)

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Dropped a new chapter just for you :)