Review Detail of BambooFirefly in Spring Day, Story of our End Semester

I'm going to give you an honest review and I'm not going to butter it up, so I'm really sorry if it hurts you. First and foremost thing for any book is it's writing quality. I can see that you are a new writer so don't be discouraged. You have a lot of mistakes and the flow of story is a bit jerky.[img=faceslap] The story concept is looking good and the plot is yet to unfold as long as you can improve your grammar and writing flow your story has potential. More updates will show where this story takes us, till then, do not stop writing. More writing will improve your craft Fighting [img=recommend][img=Loving it]