Review Detail of KingValos in The Youngest S-Ranker - Journey to the peak

Hello, Author here. So after 15 chapters, I thought I would write a review of my story so far. This is my first web novel, and I have big plans for the future of the story. The story may start a bit slow, but it is needed to introduce characters that will come in and out of the story and to set a scene for the huge events that will come later in the novel. The main character starts young but will consistently age throughout the novel. There won't be any very large time skips, there will however be time skips of a few weeks or months. The novel will focus on the development of the main character in regard to both his strength, personality, and interpersonal relationships. If you have any questions regarding the story please ask them here, I will respond ASAP. Thanks KingValos