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Review Detail of Adhitya_Aji_Wibowo in Group Chat in Douluo Dalu

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Adhitya_Aji_Wibowo
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I started reading because I enjoys chat fic. This one can be considered decent, but the format of writing is sadly VERY lazy. Maybe I was spoiled by reading fanfics here, scribblehub, ffnet, and qq instead of wattpad but honestly wattpad's quality is too dang low and I HATED them with PASSION. I mean, come on! write the conversation better bro, why would you write a story in a script format.. It would enrich your story, instead of them being static conversation. For example you write your conversation like this : Bibi Dong :"I am Bibi Dong, Level 95 Douluo...." Fang Smthng :" I am Fang something something whatever.." that's too static man, what's the different between the chat and real world conversation?! why can't you write it like this for example: "Hello fellow chat group member. I am Bibi Dong." The beautiful woman with unnatural grace and beauty greeted Fang smthng with a small smile. "Greetings, Lady Bibi Dong, I am Fang smthng." Fang smthng replied happily to her. Can you see the different? It gave better insight to how the conversation goes. You can illustrate how the conversation happen better that way instead of writing story conversation in that horrendously apocalyptically ugly wattpad-ey elementary school-y style with added word count as a bonus my bro. PLEASE, I BEG YOU! DON'T TURN THIS BEAUTIFUL SITE INTO ANOTHER WATTPAD!!

Group Chat in Douluo Dalu

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