the fan fic is amazing the only Flaw I see is Author don't know how to write Interesting Female Characters, I don't want to say this but Author Create many outstanding character so I assume He will create an amazing Female Lead but it sad to say that it's utterly disappointing her only purpose is to stabilized his reign for his territory which is not necessary need because it was already conquered by him and considering his kingdom has higher technology and how her treats citizen is that necessary? at all and to add salt to this is that girl determination is to revive her fallen family and manipulate mc to her bidding where her mother order which is never gonna happen And all her achievement so far is based of mc subordinate who strictly dieting and make her exercise to lose weight LOL. She's so bland to be honest even random civilian pov has story to tell than her more like a background character than Female lead.
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