I just read your book from chap 1_122 all I can say is that it's one of the best ff out there and you my guy deserves your flowers. only comment I can make is that the mc isn't the main topic of the novel but the kingdom building and the povs of the people either surrounding him or his potential enemies, try tweaking it a little bit so that we would be able to know more about the mc but otherwise phenomenal job.
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