Review Detail of Apolonius556 in Between blood and ice: A love between Damon Salvatore and Kate Denali

Here the author making a self-criticism, I hope you like this story, as you can see it will be about romance and conflict that 2 extremely interesting people have to face. Damon Salvatore from The Vampire Diaries and Kate Denali from Twilight. The story will have short chapters, but there will be many, so I hope you like it. Any feedback is appreciated so that we can continue to improve. PS: Sorry if there are any typos or spelling errors, English is not my first language.