Review Detail of Kurama24 in Overhauled

Stopped at chapter 13 bcz that was my limit but these are the pros and cons imo: 1. The writing quality overall is near perfect there are some grammar mistakes, typos but nothing that ruins the sentence. The only problem for me is that the chapters are too wordy/filled with things can be skipped or summarized. 2. The chapters are long which is good 3. Some chapters were edited/updated so some things ended up getting mixed like him remembering his name and the whole they are/aren't my family and I'm not their actual child thing. 4. The biggest turn off is the mc himself bcz he is a mix of a hypocrite, narcissist, and he's dismissive of his classmates while trying to act all mature even though his emotions got the better of him a few times. The whole issue stems from the mc himself especially bcz of the whole "I'm mentally in my 30s so that's why I'll act edgy and avoid interacting with these 14 yr olds but I'll be good friends with these 17-18 yr olds just bcz they are my age before reincarnating..." like is that 4 yr difference really necessary? if you've read "mha ope ope no mi" then this mc (of overhauled) is like a watered down version of that mc (ope ope no mi). 5. The mc likes to mentally (in his thoughts) bash izuku just bcz he didn't go to a gym to train physically (as if that's going to make a difference) and puts mirio on a pedestal. Like i know izuku isn't that good of a protagonist but people forget he was 4 when his dreams got crushed (quirkless) and the bullying started so u can't expect him to suddenly be like "It's not the time to cry i should prepare to go to the gym after 5-6 yrs and also sign up in a dojo..." that only happens with isekai Mc's. Mirio on the other hand while he was slightly bullied or laughed at bcz he can't use his quirk well, at least he had 1 compared to izuku. 6. 13 chapters and soo far it's just an SI mc since not much changed from the story which makes it boring. Overall this ff is a hit or miss depending if u can tolerate the mc until his character development kicks in which is probably in chapter 20+