Review Detail of Lord_Zero_0166 in The Hedge Lord

Author here!!! This is not a reincarnation novel. Romance and comedy will be there from time to time but not much as the world set in is dark and gritty. Our MC is a Stoic type. He may sound like a reincarnated person due to his weird and intellectual mind but he is not because as the backstory said, He had been a squire to a wandering knight and was a wandering knight himself. The thing is, he has somewhat of a photographic memory. As for me, I have several weaknesses while writing ....1. Action scenes I cannot coordinate well.2. Dialogues 3. Grammar 4. Showing out the emotion of the characters.anyway, enjoy my terrible novel. Do comment and support.