Review Detail of lostfan in The Hedge Lord

Item: The Hedge Lord
Rating: 4

Review detail

lostfanLv1410mthlostfan

your story is interesting, the flow of the story is good, there's are a few problem with the story their is no introduction to the mc, is it a story about reincarnated are not than other than that your story is very good 😊

The Hedge Lord

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Lord_Zero_0166AuthorLord_Zero_0166

thanks

lostfan:but anyway your story is great no many kingdom building novel on here

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Lord_Zero_0166AuthorLord_Zero_0166

Thank you for the review. I don't like to introduce the mc in the first chapters. Nowadays, it had became so cliche. I like to explore each part as I write on and the reader reads on.

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lostfanLv14lostfan

but at least you have to give synopsis

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lostfanLv14lostfan

but anyway your story is great no many kingdom building novel on here

lostfan:but at least you have to give synopsis

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Lord_Zero_0166AuthorLord_Zero_0166

Haha... I forgot to...

lostfan:but at least you have to give synopsis

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