This is a piece of strong writing, you could feel the emotion of the characters and uses descriptive language to portray what's going on, it's so vivid and each paragraph is coherent, running at a good pace. It uses more showing than telling and is executed perfectly. The introduction is intriguing enough to force readers to flip to the next page.
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