Review Detail of AllenCross in I'm Revan (Star Wars)

This story is acceptable, but with a complete lack of familiarization and character development, and with a budding connection early on, it feels more like a diary than a fanfic. However, that is secondary. The main issue is that this author has not completed a single short story (fanfic), which increases the risk of reading his works. Sadly, that is the case.