Review Detail of Mr_Morning_Star in Only Death Loves Her

Sure I had some things to say about the pacing and writing, to be honest. The grammar can be better but I like the dark style you're going for. Certainly good but hey there's always room for improvement. As for the pacing, there could be less movement description but since it's webnovel sometimes authors add more movement description as a way to reach the word quota. Over all still nice solid 4.6