Review Detail of MajimaMunancho24 in A THIRD DELGADO

I don't know if it's just me, but I found it hard to follow. Too many crossovers and not clear with timeskips, I've been reading each chapter as a mini story arc with timeskips missing a chunk of interaction between characters. I do believe this fic has a good start, but wavers as more and more characters are introduced as each chapter passes. The main character for me is a bit much, I think he has too much going on as he changes rapidly, not sure if it reads better in Spanish. Wish you all the best with this story!