Review Detail of Daoistj5FtL1 in Willy & Chrissy - Moved To New Link.

the story is pretty good, it's sweet and charming a good read to pass time. it's easy to digest and understand the plot and the author is pretty good at combating his thoughts. I do have a problem though it would be good if he added a little bit more detail to the places the MC is found adding more life to the world and contrasting more on his surroundings and appearance. I would also like to add that it would be great if the author ended each chapter with a cliff hanger so that I can be left wanting more and anticipating the next release of each chapter. but all in all good job author really liking the progression and cant wait to see where this story goes ᕙ(⇀‸↼‶)ᕗ