Review Detail of Upcoming_Region in World Enemy

Item: World Enemy
Rating: 4.4

Review detail

Upcoming_RegionLv131yrUpcoming_Region

If you make a next novel try to make it more detailed since people will get confused on who's talking also make sure to slow down the story and talk about the village or surrounding places and your plan 'What MC plans is'

World Enemy

MatMax

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MatMaxAuthorMatMax

Yeah I speed runed it, I just wanted to get to the new world as fast as possible. to be honest at first i Don't even have an plan what mc should be like.

Upcoming_Region:Also he got settled in too fast in the New World barely mentioning how he misses his old world since of his crush

1yr

Upcoming_RegionLv13Upcoming_Region

Also he got settled in too fast in the New World barely mentioning how he misses his old world since of his crush

1yr

MatMaxAuthorMatMax

Yes, I need to work on my descriptions. That's why I decided that my first novel should be a fanfic. Since I've changed the setting a bit, I plan to fill it with my own stuff. So I don't describe Carne village that much, because I assume that people already know this and other places through anime and light novels.

1yr