First chapter in my opinion is a complete trainwreck . Second definitely better quality . I hope that you my readers can give meconstructive criticism thanks to that i will improve faster. Good night/day.
MatMax
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I say hello to my fellow member of the No-Harem sect
Azathoth2:good
is this a harem?
No
Azathoth2:is this a harem?
good
MatMax:No
It's good to see fellow members
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