Okay start. Usually dont read stories with so few chapters but are a fan of assassin stories so made an exception this time. Some unnessesary info dumps and little bad english. Also hope you up the chapter per week written to atleast 7. Best would have been if you could double that. In the start most people dont wanna read beacause of so few chapters so if they wanna start on something the updates need to be often. Atleast one everyday. Writing Quality: 3 Stability of Updates: 3 Story Development: 5 Character Design: 5 World Background: 4
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