Review Detail of Naphulae in The Forsaken Sovereign
Review detail
Mandatory 5-star self-review. I'm confident in the quality of my writing and guarantee you its consistency throughout the book. If you like grim worlds with a dark fantasy feel, unfathomable Lovecraftian horrors, and the threat of madness at every corner, this is the story for you. As I have noted, the beginning will be slow but not uninteresting. The protagonist is highly intelligent, manipulative, and cunning but not overly ruthless nor a murder hobo. His first taste of power will come relatively late, but it will be sweet, and worth it after all the hurdles he will have faced. If you have any questions, don't hesitate to ask. Also, don't forget to vote and leave a review. It greatly motivates me to continue writing!
The Forsaken Sovereign
Naphulae
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can you create a new story that is antiharem. story about a man that transmigrator into a reality with a heaven defining ability (cheat code) he conquers everything. when he reached the peak of his life. he discover another word Invaders a creatures from other realities. before the battle even began he was betrayed by his heroines then he discovered that all the heaven defining ability that he have. was given to him by the another invaders. with the last strength he has. he escaped the battlefield and fled because he don't have enough life force. but before he died he choose to create a system. a system that is going to help he's host to get more power so he use his having defining ability and the will of his own reality and other word reality. this is just the beginning of the story you can choose how the story will go and how is going to end I hope you like it this is just the creation of the system so you can make the system so overpowered please. antiharem please
solardx_gamer:hello author! I was wondering if you could make an auxiliary chapter with the definitions and descriptions of the different stuff you introduce. cause it's kinda hard to remember all of the new concepts without going to reread
There may be romance at some point, though there are no plans for it in the near future. No harem, however.
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Naphulae:There may be romance at some point, though there are no plans for it in the near future. No harem, however.
you literally just he can only trust himself in this world in the synopsis and your adding romance smh
Naphulae:There may be romance at some point, though there are no plans for it in the near future. No harem, however.
Naphulae:There may be romance at some point, though there are no plans for it in the near future. No harem, however.
The story is still in development, which is why I said: "may." It could very well have no romance in it, depending on how the MC and the narrative evolve.
Anovatic:Donāt really think romance will fit in this novel. Not for MC at least.
I for one think that romance can be good in every story if the author knows how to use it, so im lookin forward to it
Naphulae:The story is still in development, which is why I said: "may." It could very well have no romance in it, depending on how the MC and the narrative evolve.
Hey I love your book and wanted to know if the Mc will end up being a dark mage or necromancer of some sorts? Chapter 27 currently and Iām excited to see which magic and canāt wait anymore lol. I just think Mc seems to be a good fit for a necromancer and wanted to learn ahead of time. Also good job so far wjth the book. Itās amazinf
I'm glad that you're enjoying my book! As for the MC's abilities, I can't say much without it being a spoiler since the power system is quite complex and tied to the plot. However, if anything exists within this universe that could be called "dark magic," his Sorceries would be the closest thing to it.
Kevin_Harper_1476:Hey I love your book and wanted to know if the Mc will end up being a dark mage or necromancer of some sorts? Chapter 27 currently and Iām excited to see which magic and canāt wait anymore lol. I just think Mc seems to be a good fit for a necromancer and wanted to learn ahead of time. Also good job so far wjth the book. Itās amazinf
Naphulae:I'm glad that you're enjoying my book! As for the MC's abilities, I can't say much without it being a spoiler since the power system is quite complex and tied to the plot. However, if anything exists within this universe that could be called "dark magic," his Sorceries would be the closest thing to it.
My current outline of Book 1 places it at around 700+ chapters, though it might very well reach the 1000 cap.
Noah_0_0:Hi author, I just want to know if the novel chapters will exceed 1000 ch or is it a short story between 500 - 1000?
there should be no romance because it doesn't fit in the world of madness if you put the story will fall
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Naphulae:There may be romance at some point, though there are no plans for it in the near future. No harem, however.
Naphulae:The story is still in development, which is why I said: "may." It could very well have no romance in it, depending on how the MC and the narrative evolve.
Naphulae:The story is still in development, which is why I said: "may." It could very well have no romance in it, depending on how the MC and the narrative evolve.