Review Detail of Lackada1sical in Marvel: The Journey

Update as of Ch.60~ - Great work with the corrections made in your work showing less to no mistake grammatical errors since last I reviewed it. - Sadly, story development & plot progression is still lacking (Abysmally slow). Too many info dumps which are too redundant (too focused on word count). - MC's development & characterization is slowly progressing starting with chapter 40 (but still too many POV's) which is kinda bothering & less engaging. - Update stability isn't up to par based on the quality of this FF. (Subpar but potential gem). - Still lacking of world progression even though there are tons of elements that can be explored (e.g. Inhuman, Mutant, MCU & comics) which is a bummer. - Try to lessen your info dumps and don't focus too much on word count. Lessen your pride and listen to the reviews and try to cope up with intellectual and creative criticism which would help you immensely in figuring out your own type of writing. don't be too stubborn and firmly stand on your belief as it shows your lack of adaptability. Keep on moving forward and strive to be a better version of yourself. Kudos! for still persisting and not giving up on this FF.