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You can't even bother to add at least a chapter describing his radical change from scientist to hitman. He was a scientst not some omni prodigy. Also you also mad him to good at everything, you think Dr. Erskine wouldn't notice such a balant perfectionists, he would very easily and very quickly come to not trust you because who would trust something that good in his circumstances. Also props for trying to create a no cheat character, but in a universe full of people far smarter, stronger, and better than you, don't try to use real world level geniuses when your nothing compared to Peter Parker not to mention people like Dr. Doom & Mr. Fantastic, your not even on the same level of intelligence as them when they were still in high school much less adults.

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