Review Detail of Loophus in Getting Krumped in DC with Edgy Space Magic

Item: Getting Krumped in DC with Edgy Space Magic
Rating: 1.8

Review detail

LoophusLv41yrLoophus

not much to go on mc doesn't really have a thought process that's logical in the first 5 chaps he makes a choice then when he doesn't like the way it turn out. it's revenge on 2 brain cells for him it feels like a forced plot and drama. now I don't know if there is going to be any revenge but if he goes for it he's going to sound like a 6 year old while he doing it

Getting Krumped in DC with Edgy Space Magic

YoungMasterLemon16

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YoungMasterLemon16AuthorYoungMasterLemon16

I completely agree with you that this fic has its fair share of problems, especially with character personalities as that was my main problem with writing. However, I feel that a 1-star rating was possibly a bit harsh? If nothing else, I believe that my grammar alone brings it up to 2 stars.

1yr

DcelanoLv4Dcelano

Thank you. look like i dodge a trash fic then :v

1yr