Review Detail of Xeros_Tempest in The Successor System [MOVED TO A NEW LINK]

Just read all the available chapters till now and gotta say the start of the story and the writing quality are good. The way the system addresses the mc is quite amusing and humorous. Well... can't say much about the world background and the plot 'cause it's yet to get revealed and is in its initial phase. So provide us with more chapters quickly. Or u see this; RIGHT