Review Detail of lorence_ in Soulless Players

Hello! The author is here again! Now that we will finally see the third volume of the book, I would like to give you some insight about it. For the first volume: I wrote everything that was to be expected in the book, so I might have written it a little too suddenly, as I wanted the readers to understand my expectations for the book. Of course, it's my skill that made it appear that way, so I apologize if it feels abrupt, as this is my first novel. For the second volume: In contrast to the first volume, this one progresses slowly as I am in the process of building my world. Additionally, I want to incorporate character growth and realization into my main character so that he comes across as a living person, not just a mere character in the book. As for the third volume, this is where the tricky part begins. I aim to slowly introduce other important characters and the antagonists. However, since this is my first novel, I'm having difficulty translating my ideas into writing. Despite this, I'm trying my best to learn and deliver a book that is not only entertaining but also memorable. I take inspiration for writing this book from all my favorite books and movies I've read in the past. Although I want to include them as characters, I can't do so as it would be seen as plagiarism. Instead, throughout the story, I create my own versions of the books I've read, adding a unique twist to them. That's also why the more you read my book, the more you'll come across chapters related to them. As for world-building, I draw inspiration from all the fiction and non-fiction books my sister bought when I was still a child. Since I was so poor that I couldn't afford to buy my own books, I could only read what my sister purchased, and I became enamored with them. My sister was a graduate in Special Education, so you might enjoy the novel if you're into psychology. Lastly, this novel is heavily focused on male-oriented fighting, so there won't be any romance or themes related to reproduction. Thank you for reading my lengthy essay! Haha. Please feel free to comment down below if you have any questions or recommendations on how I could further improve my skills.