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Now that the novel has finally finished its first volume, I will now rate and talk about this novel. I take inspiration for writing this novel from all the books and movies I read and watched in the past. In my head, what if I make all of my favorite characters appear in a single novel and determine the strongest among them? Thus, with this little thought, I decided to write one of my own! What to expect? 1. Most of the characters that will appear have a slight resemblance to famous books and movies, just like as I said, I take inspiration from them. 2. While I initially planned to focus everything on fighting, I later stopped and rethought whether it was a good idea or not. Soon, after days of thinking, I finally decided to make the novel's world-building a great deal. Thus, as we go along the novel, we will also learn and enjoy the world the characters were transmigrated into. What not to expect? 1. Harem. I don't like having more than one woman in my life. 2. The main character is the main character in the end. I want all the players to have equal opportunity to win. Thus, as we moved on, I like it if the readers would vote to determine the winner. Overall, just try it! I will try my best to deliver my thoughts into writing.

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Thank you, this is very informative and helpful to me. I will keep this in my mind :)

Javon_Nixon:Harems are good if you know how to write them(plus this the life of a fictional character, not yours). Romance is good depending on the type of story and characters you created. If you’re going to create a battle-orientated story, I would suggest not making romance the main focus or main motivator(not even the secondary motivator), as romance often times takes away from the story. I would also say not to make family the main motivator considering that it’s pretty overused and most ppl reading don’t care about the MC’s family if they’re not all ready significant. Overall, I would say, have a targeted audience.
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Harems are good if you know how to write them(plus this the life of a fictional character, not yours). Romance is good depending on the type of story and characters you created. If you’re going to create a battle-orientated story, I would suggest not making romance the main focus or main motivator(not even the secondary motivator), as romance often times takes away from the story. I would also say not to make family the main motivator considering that it’s pretty overused and most ppl reading don’t care about the MC’s family if they’re not all ready significant. Overall, I would say, have a targeted audience.