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Wanna say that I am enjoying what I'm seeing and can't wait for more. the writing style feels awkward at moments and there were few grammar errors but it was still very much readable. and slow down on the "no harem" đ , realistically, how many other girls could you add? you have Sung Jinah, Cha Hae-In and Kanae Tawata and that's basically it. so, author-san reconsider.
Solo Levelling: Perception
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Kono_Timoda:Gosh, just let me read I good harem solo leveling story, please đđ
Well you could also make it an AU plus you could also add say government that strong hunters are encouraged to have multiple children to help the next generation fight against the gates. (The novel doesn't say otherwise, plus, doesn't the lion looking guy looks like he has multiple girls) Plus, the sister con can be strong at times, all it could take is one puppy eyed powt and puff his heart melts. Plus sung Jin already died and saw his life flash befire his eyes so seeing his sister happy would be one of the goals in his life.
Grammy:But let us not forget that the main girl is Sung Jin woos sister if mc was to fool around with multiple girls then I doubt he would be able to tolerate it
But this ainât an AU my friend plus Jin woos sister probably wouldnât be chill with multiple girls around her man. To me it just makes no sense to have a herem especially when mc has his eyes on her and her alone rn no point of extending his gaze to multiple women.
Kono_Timoda:Well you could also make it an AU plus you could also add say government that strong hunters are encouraged to have multiple children to help the next generation fight against the gates. (The novel doesn't say otherwise, plus, doesn't the lion looking guy looks like he has multiple girls) Plus, the sister con can be strong at times, all it could take is one puppy eyed powt and puff his heart melts. Plus sung Jin already died and saw his life flash befire his eyes so seeing his sister happy would be one of the goals in his life.
Grammy:But this ainât an AU my friend plus Jin woos sister probably wouldnât be chill with multiple girls around her man. To me it just makes no sense to have a herem especially when mc has his eyes on her and her alone rn no point of extending his gaze to multiple women.
Plus, you can't say it's improbable in regards to polygamy, plus feelings change, I think it's definitely possible to catch feelings for more than one girl. or you could have the girls chasing the guy.
Grammy:But this ainât an AU my friend plus Jin woos sister probably wouldnât be chill with multiple girls around her man. To me it just makes no sense to have a herem especially when mc has his eyes on her and her alone rn no point of extending his gaze to multiple women.
Kono_Timoda:Plus, you can't say it's improbable in regards to polygamy, plus feelings change, I think it's definitely possible to catch feelings for more than one girl. or you could have the girls chasing the guy.
I mean while itâs true that feeling can change there are some that donât or partly stay and with the mcs yandare character for our MFL it would not make sense to change [(plus not real (fiction)so actual feelings would behave the same this especially applies to staryotypes)]
Kono_Timoda:Plus, you can't say it's improbable in regards to polygamy, plus feelings change, I think it's definitely possible to catch feelings for more than one girl. or you could have the girls chasing the guy.