Review Detail of Travis_Manton in As a Villain in the Fictional World

Excellent, there are a few typos here and there, or repeated sentences i.e. master of protag's master of… Plot is flowing properly. MC is active rather than being passive and handling one situation at a time. MC is cutting off paths before they develop and planning the appropriate countermeasures in advance for the necessary points. Well written flow is excellent, MC is a proper villain i.e. oh can you help me with this? No! Oh, you assumed I was asking as such thank you for your assistance. Hahaha