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AmberFullMoon
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Hi, everyone! I have prepared a new story for you, which was born in my head as a short light novel but has undergone a huge transformation. Or rather, it is still going through it, because the work is still being created. If you know my works you probably know that each one brings a little something different, but in each one you will find the struggle for that one special love that comes quite unexpectedly. I've entered this book in the Webnovel Spirity Awards 2023 so I'll be especially grateful for your support in the form of comments, Powers Stone, reviews and gifts I won't disdain either. I also invite you to my TW @FullmoonAmber I will be grateful for your help in promoting this book. As always, I wish everyone an enjoyable reading experience!

Believe in Love Again

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Vansi
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will David be top cause I like it whan I imagine him being top.He ls giving the gentle Dom vibes, it would be really cool to see meiden cute and shy ciz of David.On the other had Meiden is also giving us top vibez.With his aggressiveness and sometimes gentleness and ackwardness I think he's a good top but power bottom.But my best advice would be for both of them to dominate each other. Reversible in simpler terms because this would satisfy both sides who want to see David top and bottom and Meiden top and bottom.Other Ethan that I like how the story is proggresing and want you to keep up the good work.You can choose to follow my advice or go with the way you had planned it. Your rulesHave a good day . Chao![img=strong][img=strong]

AmberFullMoon
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Hmm, advice worth considering. I will not reveal what I have planned for now and what I have already written. I'm actually one of those authors where the characters themselves decide. I write the scene and just adapt to the characters' choices. The story still has a long way to go so I will definitely consider your suggestion. I really appreciate your comment, especially since I have a fantasy story that I put on hold because I couldn't decide which one would be top. Some beta readers strongly criticized the idea of swapping places. But that was a few years ago and trends may have changed. I appreciate every comment, every suggestion, so thank you very much for this one :)

Vansi:will David be top cause I like it whan I imagine him being top.He ls giving the gentle Dom vibes, it would be really cool to see meiden cute and shy ciz of David.On the other had Meiden is also giving us top vibez.With his aggressiveness and sometimes gentleness and ackwardness I think he's a good top but power bottom.But my best advice would be for both of them to dominate each other. Reversible in simpler terms because this would satisfy both sides who want to see David top and bottom and Meiden top and bottom.Other Ethan that I like how the story is proggresing and want you to keep up the good work.You can choose to follow my advice or go with the way you had planned it. Your rulesHave a good day . Chao![img=strong][img=strong]
Vansi
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Sorry for late reply.Its okay if you let the flow of the story determine the positions because if you suddenly force it on one of them, some readers might have taken it as you have changed the characters whole personality. I respect that you didn't take my comment badly.Most of us readers and authors also struggle to determine who will be top or bottom. What I would really appreciate is if you decide to make one of them bottom plz don't make them act like they have suddenly become a girl.Example is he instantly becomes soft, blushing every time, always accepting and submitting to everything, following the Dom's suggestions and not speaking up.I believe that a bottom can be sub in the bedroom and can also Dom the top because he also has what the other has.(a pp so he will also want to you know...the other.)There is a certain arc in villain saving system(a novel) where I really liked it that the bottom toped our protag several times. To me its like having equal standing and mutual understanding that the other is the same as me, he is not weak, we are both humans and he also has his needs.Nonetheless, I love your decision of letting the characters decide themselves so as to not force an attitude upon one of them to either sub or Dom.Thanks for replying and reading my long comment, have a lovely day and hopefully you don't get writers block[img=recommend][img=recommend] coz I'm invested.

AmberFullMoon:Hmm, advice worth considering. I will not reveal what I have planned for now and what I have already written. I'm actually one of those authors where the characters themselves decide. I write the scene and just adapt to the characters' choices. The story still has a long way to go so I will definitely consider your suggestion. I really appreciate your comment, especially since I have a fantasy story that I put on hold because I couldn't decide which one would be top. Some beta readers strongly criticized the idea of swapping places. But that was a few years ago and trends may have changed. I appreciate every comment, every suggestion, so thank you very much for this one :)
AmberFullMoon
AmberFullMoonAuthorAmberFullMoon

Thank you for your long comment, such convey the most information. I think you will not be disappointed by the behavior of my characters as far as their relationships and personalities are concerned. Especially from the chapters that are coming out now. But to use some ideas I would have to write a pretty long book. For now, my men let themselves be carried away by the mood of the moment. Little spoiler, a second couple with a lot of potential appears :) And I think I'm inspired what to do with them ;) I'm happy to consider any suggestions, so write without restraint. I am grateful for any comments, those more favorable and those less so. Of course, I prefer the nicer ones. A good word always motivates me to work and I usually write more and better then. Thank you again and have a good evening!

Vansi:Sorry for late reply.Its okay if you let the flow of the story determine the positions because if you suddenly force it on one of them, some readers might have taken it as you have changed the characters whole personality. I respect that you didn't take my comment badly.Most of us readers and authors also struggle to determine who will be top or bottom. What I would really appreciate is if you decide to make one of them bottom plz don't make them act like they have suddenly become a girl.Example is he instantly becomes soft, blushing every time, always accepting and submitting to everything, following the Dom's suggestions and not speaking up.I believe that a bottom can be sub in the bedroom and can also Dom the top because he also has what the other has.(a pp so he will also want to you know...the other.)There is a certain arc in villain saving system(a novel) where I really liked it that the bottom toped our protag several times. To me its like having equal standing and mutual understanding that the other is the same as me, he is not weak, we are both humans and he also has his needs.Nonetheless, I love your decision of letting the characters decide themselves so as to not force an attitude upon one of them to either sub or Dom.Thanks for replying and reading my long comment, have a lovely day and hopefully you don't get writers block[img=recommend][img=recommend] coz I'm invested.